KurstDisciple
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Post by KurstDisciple on Feb 27, 2008 10:45:46 GMT -5
Re'Ath:
Strength: 1 Barely enough to keep themselves upright using muscles.
Int: 15 Advanced brains.
Toughness: 5 Basically a thin layer of skin holding in internal fluids and organs.
Agility: 10 Ability to run and dodge.
Language: 15 Language with written form.
Grasping Apendage: 0 No arms what so ever.
Spec. Ability: Powered By Self
Telepathy: 20 15 for full thoughts, extra 5 for controlling beings mentally.
Telekinesis: 10 Able to lift around 200 lb's
Pyrokinesis: 7 Ability to start fires.
Chloroplast Skin: 7 Sun = Food.
Graculk:
Strength: 12 Strong.
Int: 10 Intelligent
Toughness: 12 Leathery Skin
Agility: 7 Move.
Language: 5 Grunts.
Grasping Apendage: 14 2 Fingered 1 Thumbed Hands and Feet.
Special Abilities:
Chloroplast Skin: 7 Sun = Food
Tech:
Stone Working: 9 Building Wise
Paper Making: 5 Poorly made paper.
Stone tools: 9
Stone Weapons: 2
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rushfire
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Post by rushfire on Feb 27, 2008 11:09:15 GMT -5
i dont think acclue will approve your tech
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Post by acclue lockheart on Feb 27, 2008 16:20:51 GMT -5
okay, first of all, 15 in language isn't enough for a written form, that would come into play around 20, and 20 in telepathy would allow mental suggestion, which would be more along the lines of controlling non-sentient creatures or simply planting the subconscious idea into sentient beings. You should also give an idea of how dexterous the grasping appendages would be, since that is part of the stat as well. As for technology, Rush is right, your jumping over a little bit. I can see stone working this early, but for buildings would need a few more technologies and access to certain supplies. Making paper is right out. First of all, your race hasn't even grasped exactly what simply carving wood is about, I'm not sure how they would go about processing that into paper. I'll change the things that need a bit of clarification to red for you.
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rushfire
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Post by rushfire on Feb 27, 2008 16:43:54 GMT -5
pyrokinsis at 7? and telekinesis 10? for 200lb??? thats a little much
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Post by acclue lockheart on Feb 27, 2008 17:15:50 GMT -5
I was thinking that before, but I just wasn't sure... I guess at a second opinion I should ask that it be changed too. As for pyrokinesis, Rush payed 15 for the ability to make fire, I can't let you do that at 7
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KurstDisciple
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Post by KurstDisciple on Feb 27, 2008 17:42:43 GMT -5
reformulating the race at the moment will repost later, need to work this all out on paper than on here.
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